Example for Grade 4: Narrative – Ant Colony - ID: 694

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Ant Colony

  • Purpose: Narrative
  • Grade: 4
  • ID No. 694

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One day my class was going on a field trip. We were going to a museam. When we got to the museam I got lost. I found nerf gun on the ground. I thought A kid left it there.

So I shot it at my self and turns out it was a shrink ray. So I was as small as a ant. So I walked outside and fell into a ant holl. I saw a bunch of ants. I freeked out.

So I ran and ran but then I saw the qween ant. It was the bigest ant of all. I walked out of the coleny. then I turned back to my normol size. and then I went back in the museam.

I was looking for my class. but I could not find my class. and they were getting on the bus. So I ran to the bus. and got on the dus.

that was my story the end