Grade 4

Narrative

Writing Extended Response

Compose Full Texts

Ant Colony

Conventions

Development/Elaboration

Organization/Purpose

There is a pattern of errors in sentence structure. Because there is no punctuation with the exception of the one period, the entire first paragraph is essentially a run-on sentence.
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There are punctuation errors, mostly missing punctuation (e.g., there should be a comma in the first sentence after the introductory element “When  I   shrunk,” and there is a lack of commas for compound constructions).
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There are some errors in grammar usage. For example, the writer switches from past to present tense halfway through the response. The writer also uses the wrong article “a ant” for “an ant” and has an error with the frequently confused word “there” in place of “their.”
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There are many spelling errors (e.g., “fel,” “laeves,” “atacing,” “pictup,” “firned”).
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There are capitalization errors (e.g., “bobby” should be capitalized as it is a proper noun).

The writer does make a vague reference connected to the source materials (“Many ants build nest  ants can live under stone and in trees they can live in  house.”), but it  is in no way integrated into a plot and detracts from the narrative purpose.

The language use is weak and interferes with meaning. The few concrete details do not help to advance the story.

The story has a limited beginning. There is no real ending to the story as the writer finishes the narrative with, “Many ants build nest ants can live under stone and in trees they can live in house.”

The beginning (“there were hundreds to thousands of ants atacing me but my firned bobby did atcing  me and there beds where made out of laeves”) could be read as a brief attempt to establish a setting.

With the exception of “When I shrunk,” there are no transitions.

The writer just lists a series of events all connected using the word “and.”

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An annotation is the educator’s explanation of how a portion of the student’s response relates to the rubric and contributes to that trait’s score. For example, the educator might explain how the response meets the expectations of a specific score point. An annotation can also describe aspects of a student response that relate to multiple score points on the rubric to demonstrate nuance when determining a score.

Annotation

One of three traits scored for the ELA performance task full write, this trait measures a student’s ability to demonstrate command of grade-level conventions of standard English: grammar usage (including sentence formation), capitalization, punctuation, and spelling.

This trait measures students’ ability to select and integrate details that support, explain, illustrate, or develop ideas. Students should elaborate these details—that is, explain and connect them, guided by the writing purpose and audience needs.
For informative/explanatory and opinion/argumentative writing purposes, these details come from source materials.
For narrative writing, this trait is called Development/Elaboration, and students are expected to integrate and develop grade-appropriate story elements such as descriptive details and dialogue. For these tasks, events and experiences are inspired by source materials.

Evidence/Elaboration

This trait measures students’ ability to establish and sustain a focus for the writing. This focus should be consistent with the task’s designated purpose and the intended audience. Strong introductions and conclusions (or, for narrative writing, beginnings and endings) and transitions help to create coherence.

Performance tasks measure a student’s ability to demonstrate critical-thinking and problem-solving skills by challenging students to apply their knowledge and skills to complex, real-world problems. In the performance task, students are presented with a collection of questions and activities connected to a single theme or scenario. These activities ask students to demonstrate capacities such as depth of understanding, writing and research skills, and complex analysis, which cannot be adequately assessed with traditional assessment questions. Performance tasks are taken on a computer (but are not computer adaptive) and take students one to two class periods to complete.

Performance Task

The prompt is the text provided to the student that requests their response. It includes some contextual information, but also includes a specific task that students complete in their writing response.

Prompt

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Prompt & Target

“Purpose” is the context for a piece of writing, or what the writer intends to accomplish. Students write texts with the following purposes:
<ul>
<li>Narrative (grades 3–8): tell a story</li>
<li>Informational (grades 3–5): present facts or data using source material</li>
<li>Explanatory (grades 6–11): explain a topic or concept by analyzing source materials</li>
<li>Opinion (grades 3–5): present and defend a position</li>
<li>Argumentative (grades 6–11): present an argument using research to form and support claims</li>
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Purposes have subtle differences depending on grade, and each writing purpose has its own scoring rubric.

Purpose

This text was written by a student in response to a Performance Task writing prompt.

Response

A rubric is a set framework for scorers to reference when determining the quality of student writing. Each trait has its own rubric, and every point value is defined in detail with examples of what to expect from student writing at each level.

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Traits are different dimensions of a student response that educators evaluate when scoring. For example, an educator will assess grammar and spelling as part of the Conventions trait (maximum of two score points) but not take grammar or spelling into account when assessing the other traits. This approach ensures that scorers evaluate student writing from multiple angles.

Example for Grade 4: Narrative – Ant Colony - ID: 674

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