Example for Grade 4: Narrative – Ant Colony - ID: 674

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Ant Colony

  • Purpose: Narrative
  • Grade: 4
  • ID No. 674

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When  I   shrunk I fel in  a ant hole and there were hundreds to thousands of ants atacing me but my firned bobby did atcing  me and there beds where made out of laeves  and they eat bugs and  they sleep on big big green leaves and we walked to Hanford and we were in Lemoore an we pictup up some bugs from there family that lives in Hanford and we walked back. Many ants build nest  ants can live under stone and in trees they can live in  house