Example for Grade 3: Narrative – Astronauts - ID: 660

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  • Purpose: Narrative
  • Grade: 3
  • ID No. 660

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about astronaut

Going to space is hard like astronaut. astronaut have to do there job and study and, there are one astronaut that fix think and one that study about space and others. They stay at the ISS. ISS is the large spacecraft  and it need fuel so the special vehicles that are jest for space. they bring supplies like food, fuel, and other thinks. some astronaut are the Leaders, and in charge of all the people in the ship. So Notthink go’s worg and they have to work hard to Lived and They can have fun, like seeing the stare and they get power form the sun, the more sunLight the more power they get.