Example for Grade 3: Narrative – Astronauts - ID: 590

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  • Purpose: Narrative
  • Grade: 3
  • ID No. 590

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The space ship was getting ready to take off.5,4,3,2,1.BLAST OFF!

We were getting ready     to board the ship. It was alot bigger than I ectspectted.It was 200 meeters tall and 50 meeters wide.I got on then,Colt,Pyke,Royce,My Mom,My Dad.We were all on the spaceship.

10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1.BLAST OFF! We were heading for space. There would be no ocsogon unless we were in

The spaceship.We were in space I could see the moon

And the earth.

The spaceship was landing. It shutoffmmmmmmmm!