Example for Grade 5: Narrative – Whales - ID: 5534

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Whales

  • Purpose: Narrative
  • Grade: 5
  • ID No. 5534

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WHEN A BOY AND HIS FAMily WENT ON A TRIP TO THE OCEAN. HE WAS SO HAPPY HE COULD GET IN THE CAR RIGHT NOW . IT WAS A LONG DRIVE. FINALLY THEY GOT THERE .IT IS BIG THE BOY SAYS .
IT IS SAYS THE MOTHER.NEXT THEY GO ON A TRIP IN THE SEA.THEY ARE ON THE BOAT AND A HUGE CRETRE comes out it is a whale. they pet it.