Example for Grade 3: Opinion – Islands - ID: 452

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  • Purpose: Opinion
  • Grade: 3
  • ID No. 452

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My opinion is to to a hot /warm island because you can crops and swim on a happy day. You can also play in the back yard on a hot summer day.But on a cold island all you do is real go fishing. You can not go swiming on a cold island My opinion for a cold island is not to go there because it is cold there and all you realy do is go fishing there. Another reason i do not like a cold island is that you can not go swimming there but if you do go swimming there it will hurt an the water will be as cold as ice!!Brrrrrrr Hot islands i sugest you go to if you go on a vacation. If you chose a cold island thats ok but prepare to get cold for all your vaction!!!!!