Example for Grade 6: Narrative – Robots - ID: 4122

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  • Purpose: Narrative
  • Grade: 6
  • ID No. 4122

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It is the year 2015 and thing are going awesome. My name is Jacob. I dont have many friends, but what i do have is a tiny remote controled robot thats so cool to me. His name is Frank. He doesnt do much stuff, but he can carry a lot. I mean a LOT! When we moved to Albany, New York, he carried all the boxes.
One day Frank and I were going to get some groceries and when we came home, we both took a nap. When I woke up i couln’t find him. I looked all over until I saw him in the kitchen watching tv, but as a fully grown ginormous robot. as soon as I walked in he said.
“Hi Jacob!”.
I suddenly screamed ran out of the house moved to Bruce Wisconsin, and changed my name to Connor. I never saw Frank again.