Example for Grade 6: Narrative – Robots - ID: 4115
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one dark and stormy night there was a mad scienteist who created the most amazing robot ever. he called it x-bot 6969.the x-bot6969 was so amazing it could jump,talk,ply,run,and even cook.but it all went wrong on march 13th on friday at noon.the robot went bonkers it was kicking things and destroying anything in sight .so what else could the scientes do but have to destroy the best creation ever. he ran up behind the x-bot6969and shot it with a ray gun but it had no effect so he went to his work bench and in the blink of an eye he made the … phinoex gun he shot once and a huge ball of fire came out and blew the x-bot6969 to smitherines. THE END