Example for Grade 5: Opinion – Service Animals - ID: 4034

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Service Animals

  • Purpose: Opinion
  • Grade: 5
  • ID No. 4034

Student Response

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I think that the new law is very reasonable.
One reason is, because people can get diseases from a snake or a pig. This law protects people from getting sick and is a trouble to their owners who carry them around everyday.
This law also shelters people from danger. If someone were to take a snake into a resturant, it could swallow someone whole! But, if the rule were to stay peole would stay unharmed.
A dog also sits quietly at shows and other things so the
Besides, this law doesn’t enforce that you can’t have a service animal anywhere, so you can still have a monkey or a bird in your home helping you, you just can’t have them in public places.
That is why I think that the law should stay.