Example for Grade 4: Informational – Animal Habitats - ID: 4008

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Animal Habitats

  • Purpose: Informational
  • Grade: 4
  • ID No. 4008

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Thing Mrs.Odom’s class learned. Wow, its great to know that we are protected and safe with our families. But animals aren’t, they are outside where poeple can shoot them and thing are destroring thier homes.They can be in hot, cold ,dark cruel weather!. I’m going to tell you how creul it can get for these pore animals.Here we go!!! In the Anarctica near the South Pole,it can be super cold. The weather can be as cold as minus 128 degrees Fahrenheit and the water can be 32 degrees. I know what you’re thinking “How do ice fish stay alive.” Well its because of their blood! Ice fish have a special protein that lets them swim deep down though layers of ice. The opisit of cold is hot, so that leads us to the desert. In the desert there are snakes, lizards, mice, owl, squirrels, and other animals like that. Most of the desert animals hunt at night cause it is cool, that means they are nactural.Nactural means something or someone can see at night. This is how animal stay alive in this creul world. This has been Mrs. Odom’s class reporting the news.Thank you for reading our news.