Example for Grade 4: Informational – Animal Habitats - ID: 3989

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Animal Habitats

  • Purpose: Informational
  • Grade: 4
  • ID No. 3989

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Camels live in a hot environment,wich is very tough to live in.Whales,penguins,and polar bears also live in a very tough environment,wich is very cold.Frogs have to live outside in the cold.Some hawks live on people’s roof wich is different.Some mice live in people’s house in a little tiny hole on their wall.In the Sonoran Desert of Arizona the little elf owl lives inside a tall saguaro cactus.Inside the cactus has natural air-conditioning.The cactus is full of water.Because the cactus is full of water the elf owl has a nice cool home,wich is very different because the elf owl lives INSIDE a cactus and not many animals live inside a cactus.