Example for Grade 8: Explanatory – Memory Training - ID: 3362

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Memory Training

  • Purpose: Explanatory
  • Grade: 8
  • ID No. 3362

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Once upon a time my cat ran really fast and broke her leg. Then the next day we went to the vet and she got her leg amputated. She is the best cat anyone could ask for and I love her with all my heart. She loves to play in the garden and catch lizards and doves. The first dove she got was right before my birthday! I like to cuddle with her. She has the softest fur and she loves to be pet. I usually refer to her as a tripod because she only has three legs. Her name is Missy.

She can also me a butt though. Sometimes when I do my homework, she jumps onto the desk and sits right on my work. She will also knock the pens and pencils off the desk over and over again. Missy is constantly begging for food and when we give it to her, she throws up.

Either way, I love Missy and I always will.