Example for Grade 7: Narrative – Mount Everest - ID: 3337

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Mount Everest

  • Purpose: Narrative
  • Grade: 7
  • ID No. 3337

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In the Preparing to clime article and what you need to do it, it tells others and me how to clime Mount Everest and it tells that if you want to do you have to have guts and bravery kind of like that but it also tells you more about the mountain like what happens their and whats it like when you go there and says you need an oxygen tank since theirs not much oxygen the higher you go up.

Its also telling you that a lot people before they went they trained a lot ran for 3 miles everyday to get prepared and they have to have a healthy body and health to try to make it to the top since it said that you should have good lungs when you go up there since you might be using an oxygen tank. If i wanted to clime Mount Everest i would use these articles to tell me the dangers and the feeling of success when you go to the top.