Example for Grade 5: Informational – Ready for a Nap - ID: 3312

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Ready for a Nap

  • Purpose: Informational
  • Grade: 5
  • ID No. 3312

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A 700 pound black bear shufled through a wet forest in Yellowstone National Park. He stopped to catch a fish with one swat of his huge paw and then ambled on toward a clear path nice and sunny every day. In the sunny path was another black bear in the distance and it was a girl and he liked her so every day he goes and gets her a fish and she would eat it but one day another bigger black bear came and wanted to fight with the black bear that was giving the girl bear fish and they fought and the smaller bear won and the girl bear and the black bear were happily together at last.