Example for Grade 3: Opinion – Islands - ID: 2283

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  • Purpose: Opinion
  • Grade: 3
  • ID No. 2283

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I woke up to ask mom if we can go to a hot island because we live at a place were its very cold. When i asked mom said yes so i ran to my room and started to pack up then mom packed all the food and her things in her room and i packed my toys after we packed i went in the car and mom drove we got to the airport and mom paid for the hot island then 2 hours later our plane came and we went in the plane then the plane went. When we got off i ran to the beach and mom came after for me. Then we got to the beach and went to the changing zone to change our cloths. then we got out of the changing zone i ran to the water and jumped into the water then mom came in the water and splashed me and i laughed after that we went in the changing zone. When we got out of their we walked to the airport and mom paid to go back to hawaii. Then we got in the plane. After we got out of the plane mom drove me home we unpacked and slept.