Example for Grade 4: Narrative – Ant Colony - ID: 2269

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Ant Colony

  • Purpose: Narrative
  • Grade: 4
  • ID No. 2269

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Did you know that there are small ants that have job’s that help other ant’s out. Like this job as a soldier ant they guard the holes and if another ant want’s to go in they have to tap the soldier ant’s head. Ant’s live in rainforest sidewalks and more places around the world. There is a queen ant that lays egg’s. Most of the woker ant’s goal is to take care of the queen and her offspring. Also did you know that woker ant’s are expected to build, and take care of there colony. Ant’s hunt for there own food some ants just store there food. Ant’s have stables to help other incest’s. Ant’s are amazing because they can communicate to protect the ant’s from danger. Threre is a type chemical called pheromone that other ant’s can pickup and follow the sent. This is why ant’s are so amazing in many diffirent many ways. store rooms save food for the ants so they don’t have to go out to get more food. Ant’s diet is seeds, grains, or a servant type of animal. There is more than 12,ooo speies of ant’s. All the species of an’ts work hard. This is why ant’s are so helpful to their colony.